User:Alaina.marcotte/Lake Cushman/Oliviaanne2001 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

alaina.marcotte


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Alaina.marcotte/Lake_Cushman?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lake Cushman

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Although your lead remained unchanged, it is more relevant to the article as you just expand upon and add sections in the article about what is already mentioned in the lead from previous versions. This makes it fit better within your updated version. Your content seems relevant and up to date. I wonder, however, if the notable events are "encyclopedic". If they are, they are done well and should be kept but just ensure of whether or not to keep them. Your tone is very neutral, it seems difficult to be biased in this article anyways. I noticed one typo, referring to "Mt. Glady's", it doesn't need an apostrophe and should just be (Mt. Gladys). The sources check out as well, the only question I had was about the Lucky Dog Casino source, not sure how reputable it is but I was unable to click the link for some reason in your sandbox, it would just highlight the whole reference section. The image was added previously, but good choice to keep it. I think everything you added really gave more value to the article and gives readers a comprehensive idea of what Lake Cushman is, what recreational activities it offers, and important general information about the lake.