User:Alanag2004/Therapy/Parleenk22 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Alanag2004/Therapy


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Alanag2004/Therapy?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Therapy

Evaluate the drafted changes
Alana's sandbox draft for therapy was well written with reliable sources places in the correct spots that make sense. The paragraph covers the topic of the heading. The lead is not overly detailed and it has a decent amount of information. She could have added some information about the types of therapies she listed and explained what they did, if they work, and the what type of situations require that type of therapy. She could have also explained more on what a theruapatic response was also. Overall the sources support her information. I can't compare what the articles information was before.