User:Alanakay13/Deaf Gain/Bradleysmiley Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Deaf Gain


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Alanakay13/Deaf Gain
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The first citation link does not work.

Adding the Deaf Problem subsection will be beneficial as this topic originated from #deafproblem because the deaf community wanted to gain a positive view of Deaf identity. Anecdotal, though.

Add direct reference to 1905 New York times article. When I saw this sentence I immediately wanted to see the article.

The flow of the article looks great to me. Easy to follow.

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