User:Alanflz/James M. Jay/Karlyelite23 Peer Review

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Alanflz
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In this article, there was very good use of sources throughout the paragraphs. This makes the article more credible. It was very interesting that you were able to find so much background information. If he received any awards, you could add those. Im curious your plans for other topics you could add. Great job!