User:Alaska1022/Laura Freeman/Evilmanedwolf Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Alaska1022


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 * User:Alaska1022/Laura Freeman


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Laura Freeman

Evaluate the drafted changes
The drafted change looks really good so far. Adding a general list of projects that Laura Freeman has worked on is very good and essential to adding on to what Laura has done as an illustrator. Also adding sources from the books that Laura has worked on is really good especially when compiling a list of work. What you could work on next is adding more about Laura Freeman into the article. I checked out the main article and their was not much about Laura in it aside from her family and some things about what someone said about one of the books she illustrated. You could expand on the fact that she won an award with someone according to the article. You might be able to find interviews with Laura Freeman on her illustrations and about why she makes the illustrations that she makes. Other than that, I really do not have anything to add other than I could not find the books through the ISBN numbers of the books on Wikipedia. It might just be a Wikipedia thing and that is all, I trust that these are reliable sources. It could also be just me because I have not messed with searching for books on Wikipedia, but who knows.