User:Alaynna2023/Single-subject research/Sarahamc0714 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Alaynna2023


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Alaynna2023/Single-subject Research
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Single-subject research

Evaluate the drafted changes
The main suggestion I can make for the draft you have so far is to ensure you have secondary literature citations for the article that evidence the information that is presented. Currently, there are no references listed so I am unsure where you got the information from. I would also ensure that the sentences that are written are one of neutral tone that is informative rather than argumentative. The one place it seems bias to me is the sentence describing the importance of this kind of research. Consider saying "Single-subject research allows for..." rather than saying it is "important because...". In doing so, be sure to add a citation to the end. Additionally, ensure that any information added to the "Lead" section is relevant to major sections that will be within the article body. The original article, as a whole, is very vague and does not give complete information about its subject. I would suggest further developing all current sections in the original article to ensure proper understanding can be achieved. Within the original article, it is also unclear exactly what single-subject research is. Thus, I would suggest creating sections about the history of single-subject research and provide detailed information regarding what this exactly is. Also, I think examples of this type of research or the use of some kind of media imagery could aid in the understanding of this. Overall, there is a lot of room to create a great final article. Keep up the work!