User:Albanmartinez/Odilia Romero/Noragalindo Peer Review

a brief desGeneral info
(alban Martinez)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Albanmartinez/Odilia RomeroLink to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
LEAD:

article starts with a brief description of the topic, and is concise.

not overly detailed- there is 2+ articles based on the same wiki topic but there isn't any information differing this wiki to the ones already present. perhaps it is an addition to the ones already created? if so I believe instructor wants us to add the old wiki by copy+paste into our current sandbox and edit it that way. to add additions once the old wiki is in your sandbox you will cross out the information you dont believe is concise and then add your information bold so you can receive credit for your own additions to the wiki. im not entirely sure, but this is what I have seen in most people wiki and how the clashes been doing it :) I would just add more sources as there is only one added at the moment, which im sure you'll get to.