User:Alcnra/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
(Provide a link to the article here.) https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/indirect_kiss

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

Compared to the page Kiss, indirect kiss is very bland and could use more edits.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

This article is formatted well for the content that is published on the page. There was no previous discussions on the talk page. The articles strengths is that it provides links to definitions for important words through other wiki pages. I feel like this wiki page is still under construction. There is no example photo of an indirect kiss, nor is there a history on where an indirect kiss originated. The article could be improved by elaborating on the example that was provided in parenthesis since the example is hard to comprehend.

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