User:Alcnra/Olfactic Communication/ChaseWeber17 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Alcnra


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Alcnra/Olfactic_Communication?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Lead
Guides the reader beautifully through what exactly the Olfactic Communication is theoretically. Wouldn't mind a little bit longer of a olfactic part with examples.

Content
Introduction wise this content is great, only critique I may offer is introduce a more recent time in history when olfactic communication was used relevantly. I would introduce this part right after talking about Henning's Theory.

Tone and Balance
In terms on Tone and Balance this article fits all parameter as far as I can tell, very good job.

Source and References
10/10

Images and Media
I think the addition of a picture to the right of your your contents would be very helpful.

Overall Impressions
I thought the lead of the article was underwhelming, considering there is so much research and articles about the topic. I think it would be a good start bye expanding on the topic. COVID-19 section, this section is confusing and seems rushed. Expanding this section would really help with olfactic communication application in terms of timely and relevant examples. Tone and balance, source and references, and Images and Media (consider picture next to the contents section) are all exemplary.