User:Ale g131/Colonialism and genocide/Cyborg6607 Peer Review

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Username: Ale g131
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 * User:Ale g131/Colonialism and genocide
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 * Colonialism and genocide
 * Colonialism and genocide

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead
The lead quickly sums up what the section is describing. Straight to the point.

Content
The content was kept up to date with given reference articles. Dates were correctly stated and referanced to inform designated recorded moments in history.

Tone and Balance
No signs of any biased in formation, article topic especially does not allow this type of information to be included in the first place. Good job keeping it unbiased.

Sources and References
Certain sentences can be written better in which they don’t use the same words from the reference article such as the sentences, “it is estimated that the number of Taino people who lived on Hispaniola was at least hundreds of thousands and it may have been up to a million or more,”  in the first bullet point. These can be seen as stealing word for word.

Organization
Content is well structured, formatted correctly with bullet points and punctuations. Addition of grammatical changes were necessary and narrowed the explanation of the sentences well.

Images and Media
No images/media were added.

New articles
No new articles were added.

Overall Impressions
The article explains the topics well. It is hard to introduce new information without being biased of how civilizations could have been right or wrong in their decisions for their actions. The best action would be to further research more articles about instances in history such as the actions that led up to the first thanksgiving with the native Americans and Europeans colonizing the eastern early North America. Overall, greatly explained.