User:Alea m12/Fibromyalgia/Smcc24 Peer Review

General info
Alea m12
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Editing User:Alea m12/Fibromyalgia - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Fibromyalgia - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
I see you are currently editing the first paragraph of the Comorbidity section of the Fibromyalgia article. Your edit included a citation with statement about link between anxiety and depression and its relation to fibromyalgia. You could add more information about the types of anxiety present in people with fibromyalgia. Citation number 36 in the paragraph you are editing (citated after the word anxiety) goes in depth into the specific types of anxiety that are prevalent with this condition and statistics to support it. This could be an area to look into elaborating on the types of anxiety (like GAD, OCD, etc.) that are associated with this condition.

The article you have cited is a strong secondary source that adds good information to the article about the mental health implications. The sentence you have currently is a good start because it is neutral and unbiased. In your sentence I would recommend changing the word cause to "presents symptoms of anxiety or depression".

The last paragraph in the comorbidity section references obesity. This could be an area where you could add in sentences about nutrition and its relation to this condition or obesity as its mentioned here. The citated sources is 44 and is an accurate source that provides information that could be elaborated on. The source discusses the implications of obesity on the symptoms seen in fibromyalgia or the effect of weight loss as well.