User:AleahHahn/Kuroshio Current/JaJaBVB Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AleahHahn


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AleahHahn/Kuroshio_Current?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Kuroshio Current

Evaluate the drafted changes
Great job seperating sections and providing pertinent information for distinctive subtopics within the article! The page seems to cover many of the important physical and biological aspects of the Kurushio Current, along with more complex ways of observing its processes.

I think there are some accidental spacings in the first section (after "west side of the North Pacific"...) and in the Physical Properties section (after "Mindanao Current and the more significant"...) that may need to be adjusted. Also, it seems like the Deep Sea Erosion section may be missing some citations to back up the information it provides. This may also be the case for portions of the Eddies, Phytoplankton, and Biological Transport sections along with certain sentences throughout the article where it looks like some citations are needed.

One suggestion I have, is that you could reduce the size of the white space in the first section by either enlarging the first figure of the ocean gyres, or even switching the positions of the figure (via Visual Editor) and the table of contents (via simple wikicode: " ) so that the TOC is on the left side extending down. This may adjust some of the text, but it woud alow the figure to fit around the text.

Great job implementing some in-text links to the different terms throughout the paper as well! Much like our wiki group, I think it would be beneficial to also have some figures/images in later sections to balance out the spacing in the text, although I know some figures can be hard to come by. Overall, great work!