User:AleahHahn/Kuroshio Current/Krone035 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: maybe add a sentence about its global relevance or importance, and briefly summarize the topics covered in the article

Content: I think there are a few places that further explanation of a term (beyond just linking to the existing wiki page on the topic) could be valuable. The biggest example is probably under the "intrusion" section, providing a one sentence explanation of what this is could be really helpful for ease of reading. You definitely did a good job rearranging the existing sections and adding more biogeochemistry into the article! I also think the article could benefit from a more coherent voice throughout.

Overall: You've made great improvements, and with a bit more background in some places it's a very strong and informative article.