User:AleahHahn/Kuroshio Current/Leear2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AleahHahn


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AleahHahn/Kuroshio_Current?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Kuroshio Current

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall Impressions: Compared to the current version, I feel you added lots of great info and good sections with reliable sources. One thing I'd like to see in this wiki page is that you might extend information of Fukushima Disaster with more descriptions. As you described a lot of organisms that affect or are influenced, you might also add some interactions within the organisms via biological or physical characteristics. Overall, great work!