User:Aleahlani/Nystatin/OtherwiseDrummer Peer Review

General info
Alealani
 * Whose work are you reviewing?

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Aleahlani/Nystatin?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template Nystatin
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I could not find a draft. Let me know if I missed it in a different location.

Second peer-review
The first sentence you have feels confusingly worded and requires a source reference.

The second paragraph seems like a quality inclusion. Replace the phrase "line up nicely" with something more descriptive and formal. This content also would benefit from a reference to back it up.

I agree with the other reviewer that the third paragraph has a lot of useful content, but a narrative form description of a paper is ill-suited for wikipedia's format. Find a way to synthesize the things learned by the researchers into the article, and reference that info accordingly.

Overall, it seems like you need a few more sources to expand the content you plan to add to the wikipedia article.