User:Alej.chavez/Bone metastasis/Slimytheelder Peer Review

General info

 * Review: Slimytheelder
 * Reviewing: Bone Metastasis - Raguramm7, Alej.chavez
 * Link to draft: Bone metastasis

Evaluate the drafted changes
The "lead" is well edited for clarity. The language is relatively high level, but is well defined in the following sections so shouldn't be an issue.

The edits throughout made the article easier to read and clarified information well. I appreciated the added definition to the pain management section.

The section on prognosis is also a great addition and formatted well.

Some of the language in the Mechanism section could also be simplified by further edits to make it easier to read/comprehend.