User:Alejandracornejo/sandbox

The topic I have chosen is conjugal families. I plan to add a more clear definition to the page. I also want to add how conjugal families work in today's society and maybe how they have changed over the different decades. Conjugal families must also be different in different societies, so I will probably add something about that.

Draft
What is conjugal? married couple.

What is conjugal? married couple.

A conjugal family is the idea of a traditional family.

First paragraph: What does a conjugal family specifically consist of? conjugal families consist of a marriage of a husband, wife, and any number of children not of age. This family consists of just them (married couple and kids) no other relatives.

Conjugal family and nuclear family link together. Before conjugal families were named nuclear families.

Body: Conjugal families consists of two parents and children underage. What happens in a conjugal family when the kids are no longer underage. What does the family become. I found art Ike's on conjugal families in Asian communities and India. Differences in the different cultures.

Paragraph from wiki:

A conjugal family is a nuclear family consisting of a married couple and their children (by birth or adoption) who are unmarried and underage.The family relationship is principally focused inward and ties to extended kin are voluntary and based on emotional bonds, rather than strict duties and obligations. The spouses and their children are considered to be of prime importance, and other more distant relatives less important. The marriage bond is important and stressed. Families have evolved over time by becoming more modern. There are now same sex parents, step parents, adoptive parents so, the name conjugal family was created. It is a much more modern term for nuclear family.

Prof Garcia's Comments
Thank you for your addition to the internalization page. I don't think that your addition really "fit" with the paragraph, however. You have to be careful where you add things in Wikipedia. The paragraph was talking about psychological theories and you just interjected your sentence (using Berger's ideas) in without really fitting it correctly. Please be careful in the future. Alfgarciamora (talk) 16:54, 28 September 2016 (UTC)

What happened to listing the sources you were going to consider, Alejandra? You did not do the assignment that was due! You need to do this ASAP. Alfgarciamora (talk) 00:41, 6 October 2016 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hello Alejandra! I'm excited to be peer reviewing your article. First, I think that you should start breaking your draft down into categories. I did this and found it to be the easiest way to stay organized in what you are going to talk about. Another tip I can give you is to start looking at your article and picking out quotes that can be used in your references, that way you can start writing out what you're eventually going to put onto the wikipedia article. Happy researching! @Alejandracornejo --Samf1998 (talk) 18:18, 21 October 2016 (UTC)