User:Alesliemir/La rosa de Guadalupe/Sean831 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Alesliemir


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Alesliemir/La_rosa_de_Guadalupe?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * La rosa de Guadalupe

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hey Leslie! Thank you for your effort in expanding the article and I enjoyed reading your work! While reading your article I had a few thoughts that came to mind. Comparing your draft and the current one I think the first paragraph would be a great addition to the plot paragraph but I'm not confident as in where would the human trafficking paragraph would align itself.

The article so far seems quite developed on its own, I would suggest that you could add more about the cast of the show or if it was different every episode?

Another interesting point you can talk about is if this show had any special influence on the culture or to the audience it reaches? What more you can talk about is that maybe if the showed was nominated for any awards and if not how come?

The article says it has ran over 1000 episodes, maybe it could be interesting if you elaborated on some of the behind the scenes and funding that allowed it to reach such longevity for a TV show.

The Virgin, pops up a lot in the current article maybe it'd be interesting to dive in to who this entity is and what kind of symbolism the virgin or the rose plays and if there were any commentary on the use of symbolism.

These are mere suggestions in case you are having trouble finding more talking points to add on to the current article but other wise I think that your writing is great.