User:Alessandra.a-m.conco/Drama Queens Podcast/Samnap2 Peer Review

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 * Drama Queens Podcast
 * Drama Queens Podcast

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead
All of the information added to the lead is relevant and useful. The lead has an introduction sentence and gives a brief description.

The lead may be a little more on the detailed side, and could be made more concise.

Content
The content of the article is up-to-date and relevant. It does deal with underrepresented topics such as: sexual misconduct in Hollywood and television production.

This main idea/theme could be expanded on more.

Tone and Balance
The content does not portray a bias and is presented as 'matter of fact' and neutral.

Sources and References
There are an adequate amount of sources provided.

Due to the nature of the content, there is no academic journals or scholarly sources provided. Information comes from online magazine or news outlets.

The links work and are cited correctly.

Organization
There are some grammatical errors:

-The show Work in Progress needs to be in quotations or italics

The headings could be arranged differently, instead of mentioning under the subheading "conception" who the producer and execs are it can be made it's own heading or can be mentioned in the beginning.

There is also a possibility to include responses of audiences, whether there were positive or negative receptions from fans or other co-stars.

The content is well-written and easy to read.

New Articles Only*
The list of sources is not as exhaustive as other wikipedia articles, however, it does provide an appropriate amount considering the topic. The podcast is fairly new and not widely analyzed in any literature.

The article should have a "see also" category to provide examples of other podcasts from women in Hollywood who dissect their respective television shows or discuss issues they faced such as: Office Ladies Podcast. This will make the article more accessible and reachable to those interested in this subject.

Overall Impressions
The creation of this article is relevant and original. The content is well written and presented.