User:Aletariel/Taung Child/Tdean005 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Aletariel


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Aletariel/Taung Child
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Taung Child

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi! I think your paragraph was a well written starting point but I would appreciate more information about the criticism. What was the additional information Dart asked W.H.L. Duckworth about the brain? As far as your bibliography, it appears that the link is not working.