User:Alettertoelise79/Food desert

Add more to sandbox and look at possible ways to enhance the appeal to the article by adding more pictures. The article is dense so ask what could be added or taken away as some of the information is repetitive.

First to this article, I would add more photos of what these communities look like across America, to give the reader a visual. I think photos near the top of the article would be helpful for the reader to process the information.

I think also that this article could use some separation of urban food deserts and ones in other parts of the world. I think it is important to differentiate which kinds we are talking about, and that maybe having two separate articles, that are linked to one another, would help a reader to understand the content more.

I think the "safety" subsection of the article could have its info merged into another area as well, as it is one idea being communicated.

There is a section about crime in the "causes" section of the article, and I think this could also include info from the safety section.

I think the section of the article stating that food deserts can be blamed on the residents' eating habits can be taken away, because this is a negative comment and lacks consideration of the long history of food deserts.