User:Alettertoelise79/Food desert/Asegura01 Peer Review

General info
Alettertoelise79
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Alettertoelise79/Food_desert?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Food desert

Evaluate the drafted changes
I would say begin looking at some of the links and information that need help looking at. Maybe adding organization or pictures could help since the article is long. There was not much on the sandbox so make sure to publish to save progress.