User:AleutianTea/Positive youth development/Keerthikonda Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AleutianTea


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:AleutianTea/Positive youth development


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Positive youth development

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? - The Lead was reworked to provide a more succinct and easily understandable introduction/definition of Positive Youth Development.

Content


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? - Based on what I understand from your draft, I think the information you cited under "What I have used" seem to be pretty relevant additions to various subsections of the article. It could be helpful to see where you plan on referencing them to see how they fit in context.
 * Is the content added up-to-date? - Yes the articles you've added into the article that I can see from References are fairly new (from the 2000's)