User:AlexWillard/California Water Fix and Eco Restore/Marki737 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AlexWillard


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AlexWillard/California_Water_Fix_and_Eco_Restore?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template#Lead
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * California Water Fix and Eco Restore

Evaluate the drafted changes
The page does not have an updated lead for the content, and also does not have an updated article body. At minimum, maybe possibly add updated details to both of these sections if possible, to try to help explain the topic more thoroughly, or include information that is not already there.

The updated content includes more information about different Water Fix projects that were not there before. This information is good to include, as it gives a better idea of what kind of work this project does. Some of the information although could use updated cations, or on ones that do not have a citation already. The sources that are included are up to date and are from the organizations website. The updated content is easy to understand, and don't have any biases in them.

There are not any updated images or media on the page. Graphical images of the information talked about being included would be helpful if possible.

Overall, I believe the new information included helps improve the quality of the article, as it explains more about what kind of work the WaterFix project does. If possible, try to cite more of the statistical information included in these changes, and if possible, some more media about those statistics.

Response
Thank you for the feedback, Mark! I will take the feedback and add to the article with the recommendations you provided. There was not much more I could find in regards to the information about the California Water Fix, however I will provide an updated lead and article body as soon as possible, as well as some new and updated images. Thank you for the feedback!

- Alex Willard