User:Alex J Brickley/Henri de Tonti/Nathan1152 Peer Review

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 * Alex J Brickley
 * User:Alex J Brickley/sandbox

You've added a much better introduction to Henri de Tonti. It is concise but still provides important informationYou could probably replace some of the "Tonti"s with "he" just to reduce the repetition. You make good use of links to other Wiki pages on terms or events that aren't commonly known or may be useful information. There are a few grammar issues to fix, such as "This was troop that King Louis XIV" and "Tonti took part in the military operations in the village of Gesso, up the hills near Messina and he lost his hand in a grenade explosion, and was also taken prisoner." Maybe reading it out loud will help you catch any issues. You also seem to have a good amount of relevant sources. The order of everything also makes sense and is easy to follow along. Maybe you could find a picture to include, but this isn't very important. Overall, I think you've added good information. There is just some grammar/flow issues.