User:Alex Winetrout/Consumer electronics/Jberrien23 Peer Review

General info
Alex Winetrout
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Does your peer have 5-7 reliable sources?
 * Yes they have 7 reliable sources
 * Is at least one of them a source from class reading or the "suggested sources" list?
 * Yes I believe so
 * Does the topic link in some way to our course material?
 * Yes, consumer electronics has do do with our class. It adds an interesting element to consumerism and also modernizes it because it talks about electronics.
 * Does your peer add historical context to their article?
 * Yes, they add context from the early 2000s to key the reader in on certain electronic companies and the industry as a whole.
 * Based on what you know from course content, what do you think Wikipedia users should know about this topic?
 * I think they should know how important electronics are to the consumer market and how they have evolved over time.
 * In other words, what would you recommend adding and/or considering further?
 * I think they have some really good quotes and sources and picked a very interesting topic. I think finding a way to incorporate some of these quotes into paragraphs about the topic could make this become even better, and could become a very intriguing wikipedia article.