User:Alexander.Kantuni/The Barbarous Coast/Oliviasevy Peer Review

General info
Alexander.Kantuni
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Alexander.Kantuni/The Barbarous Coast
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):The Barbarous Coast

Evaluate the drafted changes
User is making proper grammatical and linguistic changes while preserving the information in the article.

User is making information more succinct and easy to understand for viewers who have not yet read the novel.

User is adding important clarifying information about the plot of the novel.