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= Article Evaluation: = Assigned article: Frederick Seymour

This article is rated as "Start" on the talk page. For the most part the article is neutral, however I do find some sections to be a bit wordy and unclear. As far as citations, the only citation on the page is one I had added, so there is a lot of work that needs to be done as far as fact checking and finding reputable sources. While certain areas go into detail with information, other sections lack detail or explanations, or even filling in gaps between information to make an accurate and logical timeline. Nothing has been added to the Talk Page in ten years, which is interesting to note, as a few of the source my group and I had found were more recent articles. One of the two conversations discusses his alleged alcoholism, which is relevant and interesting. The other is speculating that Seymour is actually dead in the photo of him posted on the page, which I find to be more interesting than informative or necessary. Both editors noted that they would fact check and update, but seeing has it has been ten years, I don't see that happening anytime soon.

Editing Frederick Seymour Article:
Editing can be found in Alana Simons' Sandbox. User:Alanaesimons/sandbox