User:Alexapar21/Omocat/Dominique.visperas Peer Review

General info
I'm reviewing Alexa's article on OMOCAT, the artist and creator of the videogame Omori.
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):This is a new article that Alexa's creating from scratch, because of this there's no current version.

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Alexa! For starters, the article looks great at first glance. Everything seems insightful into the author's life and origins in their story as an artist.

All the content so far is relevant and significant. While I think you can add a bit more to the initial paragraph, especially if they have other significant work or noteworthy things about them, it summarizes the article well. With the biography, I noticed a bit is missing in the second paragraph in the section discussing who OMOCAT collaborated with in the past. I think completing it would be insightful to the artist's biography. I noticed it's listed below, so including it in the biography would make it perfect. Everything also seems timely and up-to-date. I know they've been an artist since 2010, so adding a bit more in terms of what they've done career-wise would be cool and add more to the article.

In terms of images, do you plan on adding any? I think it'd be cool if you did the mini-bio on the right side of the article.

With the tone, you speak neutrally and take an informative stance on the artist. There's no bias in the work or attempts to persuade the readers of anything. Everything is organized into their respective sections as well.

The sources look clear and have information. They don't seem biased in what they're giving you and seem diverse in terms of who writes the articles. All the citation links work well and connect to the correct article and the data in terms of authors and sites. I also like how everything you can hyperlink in the Wikipedia pages is included and hyperlinked to other sites, which is a great addition to the article's tone.

As this is a new article, it follows the typical templates I see for Wikipedia articles and is formulated well. It seems like a lot of the information you can find on the artist comes from social media, which may not be reliable. So, in your sourcing, you do a good job of pulling from what's reliable since you go directly to the artist's interviews and sites for your information.

Considering this is an article you're beginning from scratch, it's a good start! Other than the portion that's missing a bit of writing, all the information looks well-organized, insightful, and significant enough to be part of the article. If I had to suggest improvements, I would say to add more to their history or other potential sections, depending on how much you plan to write. I know they're primarily known for OMORI, but if they have any other noteworthy accomplishments; I think it'd be cool to write about it.