User:Alexconzone/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating
Syracuse, New York

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I have chosen this article because I want to read it and see if the facts are true because I grew up in syracuse my whole life and I know a lot about it.

Evaluate the article
The lead section is pretty good is starts off talking about the population and how how we were a major crossroad for the Erie Canal and the multiple sets of railroads. I can tell the content is up to date just from the small edit ojn the right side updating the name of the Dome from the Carrier Dome to the JMA Wireless Dome. Pretty much all the content is relevant as pretty much all of it stays within the state and every topic loops back to the city of Syracuse. The article you can't really tell with the tone and balance because talking about Syracuse being one of the best cities in new yorkl or anything like that it's more of an up to date informational article. The sources are alright. At the beginning of each heading there is a main article that they use for the information. A lot of the linked sources throughout the article aren't really towards syracuse but to a lot of other cities throughout new york. I found the article to be well organized with the headings and will written giving me a lot of information I wasn't really expecting. I really like the images at the start because it had a picture and a link to another article about those locations themselves. If I'm gonna be honest I dont really understand the talk page but it looked like it was active and used pretty frequently. I would give the article an 8/10 because there were some good solid information about Syracuse. The only critique is I wish it would stay more on track with only syracuse than branching out into other cities for a few brief sentences. fopr the most part I think the article is well developed.