User:Alexcrocker12345/Conservation biology/Iscucchi Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Alexcrocker12345


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Not currently available, so I am providing suggestions as they pertain to the main article.


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Conservation biology

Evaluate the drafted changes
I believe the portion of the article covering parasites could actually be fleshed out more. I saw there was a main article linked; however, as a reader, I feel it would be more beneficial to have a few more points regarding the conservation biology of parasites. For example, what are some major parasites that are essential to us and are under threat? How would the extinction of these parasites affect our livelihood or different environments?

I also feel like the concepts and foundations section of the article is fairly confusing, as it includes several different topics that don't necessarily flow together. For example, conservation biology as a profession could be moved last to allow information about economic values and natural capital to flow from that.

I also believe that the section on ethics and values, which is currently limited, could be expanded.