User:Alexdaviesmorris/Worker cooperative/Jimzhen21 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Alexdaviesmorris
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Alexdaviesmorris/Worker_cooperative?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Worker cooperative

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Great explanation to this concepts, I really like it!

Well spread citations, I think they are ready for publish!

In general, the content distribution is reasonable, but I think some parts of the content are too concise, and it would be better if it can be expanded and explained more. The content of the article is neutral, you mentioned several different countries, so that your content has more examples and corroboration, I like it very much.

Since it says "rough draft", so I am guessing you are still working on the sections structure.

I am looking forward to see your final draft.

Nice work!