User:Alexdaviesmorris/Worker cooperative/SaraParkwood Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Alexdaviesmorris


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Alexdaviesmorris/Worker_cooperative?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Worker cooperative

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Note: I'm starting from where it says Rough Draft :)

You currently have each paragraph as a sub-clause, so I'm curious to see what section you were planning to add these under--in your outline you have it organized by country, so are you thinking of putting it under Worker Cooperatives by Country? It looks like the rough draft has it organized by types/sources of funding though.

Kudos for having super clear explanations! I'm completely new to this concept but your explanations and descriptions are very readable.

Your citations seem very well-spread and non-repetitive--no issues there from my end.

Tone comes across as very neutral; one thing I did notice is that you say "most co-ops do ____" a couple of times, which might be a little misleading? Maybe point out the co-ops that do that by name.

Overall great job!