User:Alexgoriani/Susan Schneider/JM-HUM Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bouhan12, Flashmcqueenkatchow, Shampoobottles, PussNBoots04, Ramennoodles07, Alec.olive


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Susan Schneider


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Susan Schneider

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is a good base for the Susan Schneider Wikipedia page. I think that you should go into more detail in the paragraphs that were there before and after you have edited them. The page gives multiple examples from her novel but they are not explained in detail. So you can modify these paragraphs to make them more relevant and full of valuable information. Furthermore, you can try to look up information about her childhood because often times, does events influence what our future job might be. This could give us the readers a better understanding of why she wrote her books and why she is discussing the topic of AI. Also, you can take more examples from her novel to make the page more interesting. You can also try to find more sources to support the information you are going to be adding to your page. Finally, this is a decent start to the article but a lot can improve this article like fuller paragraphs, more detailed examples and more information on her past.