User:Alexis Lhotka/Seiko Hashimoto/VenerableBird Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Alexis_Lhotka


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Alexis Lhotka/Seiko Hashimoto


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Seiko Hashimoto

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Well drafted, sufficient citation, changes make sense and add value to the article. One spelling mistake under "Political Career", reads "Seiko had to leave her position as on of 2 women", should be "one of two". Good work!