User:Alexisellise/Ethnocentrism/Amandab430 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Alexis Ellise


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Alexisellise/Ethnocentrism?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ethnocentrism

Evaluate the drafted changes
- It looks as though the article is just being started, which is totally okay, and sometimes it can be helpful to think through the strategy of the piece and gather resources and data so that the body of the article can come together smoothly and in a clear, concise manner.

- Using reliable sources, like journals and research papers, will help back any quotes or dominant points of focus for within the piece.

- Focusing on good grammar and spelling helps the reader trust you and your reputability as the editor.

- Without much written at the moment I would just say that dedicating some time to the piece and working out the manner of how it will be edited will be beneficial!