User:Alexiskunzelman/Sexual Consent in Film/Carrotplushie Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Alexiskunzelman's Sexual Consent in Film


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * This is an original article that doesn't exist as of right now.

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

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