User:Alexismfox1/Sweetgrass First Nation/Stbraswe Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Alexismfox1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sweetgrass First Nation

Evaluate the drafted changes
The biggest thing about the draft is that there can be more citations. There are 5 sections in the draft, 3 sources, and each source is only cited once, so there are large stretches in the draft that do not have any citations. Additionally, if possible, having more sources would be helpful, even if they say the same thing your current sources do because it strengthens what you are saying.

One part that confuses me is that under the section titled "Present", you wrote "As of December 31, 2019, the Sweetgrass First Nation consists of 2051 registered band members. 749 people, including non-first nation people and people from other first nations, currently live on the reserve." but the Sweetgrass First Nation stub that is already published to wikipedia has a list of multiple reserves that the nation is composed of, so is the information you wrote in the draft across all reserves, or just one of them?

Another thing that can improve your article is by using the links the currently published stub of Sweetgrass First Nation. Your first sentence is very similar to the first sentence of the stub, but the stub includes links to other relevant wikipedia pages, so I think you should incorporate those when you make your draft go live.

One minor thing is the word "Councilor" is misspelled as "Councillor" in the "Government" section of your draft.

Everything else looks pretty solid.