User:Alexjacullo/Portrayal of women scientists in film/Oliviabinder Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Alexjacullo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Alexjacullo/Portrayal_of_women_scientists_in_film?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Portrayal of women scientists in film

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * 1) Alex did a great job at providing nuance to the portrayal of women scientists in film. I like how she added the statistic from Eva Flicker that men make up 82% of scientists in all film in her sandbox; analyzing gender in film could appear like a more subjective idea without using such evidence. Also, I appreciated that Alex added more about the male gaze, it was very interesting!
 * 2) What changes would you suggest the author apply to the article? Why would those changes be an improvement? I don't think Alex needs to add anything to her edits. I think her contributions for Arrival and Black Panther were a great length, especially looking at the film descriptions present on the list.
 * 3) I can't think of anything to add, really, I have not watched either film she spoke about. Based off of the discussion of Princess Shuri, I think it could be interesting to add more about intersectionality or the representation of black women scientists, maybe!
 * 4) I really enjoyed reading Alex's work! I think film analysis is so interesting, and she did a great job doing it in a way that fits the Wikipedia criteria! :)