User:Alexjordangriffith/Aphotic zone/Hogan Palmer Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hogan Palmer


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Alexjordangriffith/Aphotic zone


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Aphotic zone

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the information you have is great. I think you're writing in a neutral sense and I think it's all up to date and precise. However I think you need to work on the overall layout of the article. By this I mean adding Headers as well as sub-sections of the article. Lastly I think you need to make sure to add hyperlinks to certain words throughout the article as well as hyperlinks to your bibliography.