User:Alexjordangriffith/Aphotic zone/Mdoughty332 Peer Review

This article has a lot of good information and descriptions. The topic is very interesting and the article provides a lot of discussion of the animals that live in the aphotic zone and the other parts of the ocean. The introduction is a bit confusing and there is a limited description of what the aphotic zone actually is. There are also some spelling mistakes and little details that need to be cleaned up as well as making it flow better as it is hard to follow the train of thought in this article. Some more descriptions in the introduction could help this flow better as well as breaking it up into sections to have a structure of topics and characteristics that make the aphotic zone unique. Overall, this article has a lot of good information and explains why this topic is so unique, but it doesn’t flow very easily and could be improved with some structural changes as well as an improved introduction.

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