User:Alexrevelle/Henrietta Phelps Jeffries/Cononthecob Peer Review

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 * Henrietta Phelps Jeffries
 * Henrietta Phelps Jeffries

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead
The lead provides information regarding Jeffries's birth, death, career and role as founding member of the Macedonia A.M.E. The lead does, however, not include any mention of Jeffries's trial. Furthermore, the lead mentions her role as a founding member of the Macedonia A.M.E., but there is no section regarding this aspect of her life. I believe significant additions would need to be added to this article regarding her work in the church.

Content
The content of the article includes basic biographical information with specific detail given to her trial in 1911. The article is almost lacking in content regarding Jeffries's activities in the church.

Tone and Balance
The content appears to be neutral. Facts surrounding her career, trial and her trial's significant ruling are presented in a positive light; however, no position or bias can be observed in the article.

Sources and References
Many of the sources currently used in this article are from the 90s or earlier with only a few sources being from the 2000s. The links for the web sources currently work.

Organization
The article is concise and easy to read and is lacking in any grammatical or spelling errors. The article's structure, on the other hand, is lackluster. There is one biographical section with brief information regarding Jeffries's career and no information regarding her time in the church and then there is a brief section about her trial.

Images and Media
The article includes a single photo of Jeffries which serves to provide a face to the person being studied.

Overall Impressions
This article leaves much lacking with regards to an in depth explication of Jeffries's importance within the context of the church.