User:Alexstonehill/San Juan Island National Historical Park/Arboyle Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Alexstonehill/San_Juan_Island_National_Historical_Park?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * San Juan Island National Historical Park

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead


 * You added an additional space here: in the 1872 -- or somehow it was added in formatting. I didn't fIx it because I wasn't sure if you've posted this anywhere else yet.
 * Good addition with citation for the 2013 update

Setting and historical context


 * Maybe consider adding the link to the Treaty of Washington (1871) again -- I know it's in the lead and I honestly don't know if this is wiki best practices - but I forgot about it from above and went looking for it so maybe worth having twice.

English Camp -- Updated from British


 * The article you reference at the end of this section states British Camp -- it's unclear as to why you updated this to English

Recreation


 * Again you include English camp. According to History of Canada (1763-1867) Beginning with the 1763 Treaty of Paris, New France, of which the colony of Canada was a part, formally became a part of the British Empire.

Question: Are you a double spacer after a period? Are my eyes tricking me or did you go in and add two spaces at the end of every sentence? ie: Sentence spacing & Leading

This was an interesting read. I hope my edits are helpful!

-- Amanda Boyle