User:AlextheHistoryMajor/sandbox

Evaluating Article: Manley Hot Springs, Alaska


 * The lead section is only a couple sentences long and deals with the geography of the topic at hand and its population. I believe it could be expanded some more and include perhaps a sentence of speaking on the big points of history for the topic at hand. It does not include a description of each of the sections in the article.
 * Now that another census has been collected, it may be a suggestion to work on updating the content of this article. It also just needs more content in general in a few different places, (like the lead section, climate, education, transportation, and. there were some questionable sentences that were left undeveloped in the history section). The content of this article is mostly relevant to the topic, there are a few sentences that should be expanded into paragraphs, to explain themselves and show the relevance to the article.
 * There is a neutral tone, but it does feel a little statistics-heavy. There isn't much here talking of the Native Alaskan history of this land at all, I do believe that something should be included in the article.

Possible Articles:

1. Talk:Interactional linguistics

2. Intensifier

3. Expletive

4. Elocution

5. Function word

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