User:Alguenther/Diversity of Venomous Organisms/Frankie2359 Peer Review

General info

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Evaluate the drafted changes
I added some parts of sentences to enhance flow and did some grammatical edits. I recommended adding wiki links, and I recommended a few sentence switches to different sections. I also suggested removing some flowery wording. Good article! -KJ