User:Alheilma/Manatee conservation/Megreed7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Aheilma
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Alheilma/Manatee_conservation?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Manatee conservation

Evaluate the drafted changes[edit]
Sources and References:


 * I added two sources that can help her back up claims that she did not have sources for. I also suggested that she can can add some hyperlinks to help her readers fully understand her article.

I also added some overall edits such as fixing grammatical errors and spelling errors.

Evaluate the drafted changes
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