User:Alheilma/Manatee conservation/Sjwagne1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Alheilma


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Alheilma/Manatee_conservation?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Manatee conservation

Evaluate the drafted changes
General Comments :

The new additions look good. I like that two new studies were mentioned. I think potentially adding information from a more recent study could be helpful. The sentence from your fourth reference was a bit confusing. Possibly reword it to say "In certain studies, it has been shown that manatees have good cognition (skills?) and very complex social skills. However, more research needs to be done to fully understand these skills."

Future Improvement Ideas :

I think more additions to the "Sources of Danger" section would be a good way to add to the article. I also think rewording the second sentence in the lead would be helpful. There is a warning on the article about the article not representing worldviews, so if possible incorporating a wider view of the topic could also be beneficial.

Additional Resources :

https://journals.plos.org/plosone/article?id=10.1371/journal.pone.0151450

- this journal article goes into how manatee diving patterns can impact the likelihood of them being hit by watercraft.

https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s10071-022-01686-6

- this is another journal article on manatee cognition