User:Alhs124/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1
Physician with A space vision: Flight surgeon, dr. yvonne cagle, is A top candidate for shuttle flight. (1994, Oct 05). Sacramento Observer Retrieved from https://www.proquest.com/newspapers/physician-with-space-vision-flight-surgeon-dr/docview/367704893/se-2
 * Article title
 * Yvonne Cagle:
 * Article Evaluation
 * This is a start-class article. Yvonne Cagle is a female scientist, who worked at NASA. There is an Education section, but I would like to expand this to be Education/Early life and give a more comprehensive background about her life. Further, her post NASA career section is short, as well as the Other section. There are a few statements needing citations in the Astronaut Career section. Also, there is little information on personal life. In the Astronaut career section, there is information not relating to her astronaut career specifically, just her career in general, so I would consider renaming this section.
 * Sources
 * Sources

Condoleezza rice, yvonne cagle honored at national council of negro women gala. (2002, Jan 07). Jet, 101, 38. Retrieved from https://www.proquest.com/magazines/condoleezza-rice-yvonne-cagle-honored-at-national/docview/200010593/se-2

Thomas, C. (2018, May). Dr. yvonne cagle and megan smith inspire at tech superwomen summit. Oakland Post Retrieved from https://www.proquest.com/newspapers/dr-yvonne-cagle-megan-smith-inspire-at-tech/docview/2050524926/se-2

https://www.nasa.gov/wp-content/uploads/2016/01/cagle_yvonne.pdf

https://www.su.org/experts/yvonne-cagle

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Angela Jackson
 * Article Evaluation
 * This is a start-class article. It is a very short article, despite there being resources available on Jackson's life. For example, the section on her career and biography are very short. The biography section should probably be renamed to "Early Life" because it really only includes details from her childhood. In the career section, I think it would be interesting to talk about why she became a poet and what power it holds for her, which I found in a proquest source linked below. The personal life section needs to be expanded upon as well because it is only a short sentence.
 * Sources
 * https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poets/angela-jackson
 * https://www.thehistorymakers.org/biography/angela-jackson-41
 * Isaacs, D. (2020, Dec 10). Angela jackson is illinois's new poet laureate. Reader Retrieved from https://www.proquest.com/newspapers/angela-jackson-is-illinoiss-new-poet-laureate/docview/2471521041/se-2
 * https://findingaids.library.northwestern.edu/agents/people/2603:
 * Isaacs, D. (2020, Dec 10). Angela jackson is illinois's new poet laureate. Reader Retrieved from https://www.proquest.com/newspapers/angela-jackson-is-illinoiss-new-poet-laureate/docview/2471521041/se-2
 * https://findingaids.library.northwestern.edu/agents/people/2603:

Option 3
https://web.archive.org/web/20180511215709/http://courses.wcupa.edu/johnson/locked/southey-three.htm (This is the original version)
 * Article title
 * Goldilocks and the Three Bears
 * Article Evaluation
 * I enjoyed editing Wikipedia page about the children's book, and so I was looking to do something like that again. The article is currently rated C-class but high importance. I found that the plot section would need a lot of editing. It currently reads like bullet points, and I would want to add a more detailed plot summary. It would also be interesting to add a section about modern takes/new adaptions because this story has many variations.
 * Sources
 * *After looking for sources, I realized that many of them are dated so I would not choose this article to edit*
 * Sources
 * *After looking for sources, I realized that many of them are dated so I would not choose this article to edit*

GOLDILOCKS AND THE THREE BEARS. (2012). Kirkus Reviews, Lxxx(11) Retrieved from https://www.proquest.com/trade-journals/goldilocks-three-bears/docview/1017646370/se-2

https://allpoetry.com/Excerpt--Goldilocks-and-the-Three-Bears

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Our Subway Baby OR Create a new article called "Peter Mercurio" who is the author of the book.
 * Article Evaluation
 * The article is a start-class article. I enjoyed looking into source and even adding just two sentences to this page, and so I am considering expanding it for phase 2 of the Wikipedia Project. I am most interested by the fact that this is based on a true story. I would want to add significant information to the Background section about how this is based on a true story and give information about the couple and the child that they found. This might even be better in a new article, maybe one given to the author of the book.
 * Sources
 * Snow, K. (2021). Couple reflects on subway adoption miracle more than 20 years later . New York: CQ Roll Call. Retrieved from https://www.proquest.com/other-sources/couple-reflects-on-subway-adoption-miracle-more/docview/2537379547/se-2 Mercurio, P. (2013, Mar 03). Finding a son in the subway. New York Times (1923-) Retrieved from https://www.proquest.com/historical-newspapers/finding-son-subway/docview/1814889854/se-2 OUR SUBWAY BABY. (2020). Kirkus Reviews, Lxxxviii(13) Retrieved from https://www.proquest.com/trade-journals/our-subway-baby/docview/2417855005/se-2
 * Sources
 * Snow, K. (2021). Couple reflects on subway adoption miracle more than 20 years later . New York: CQ Roll Call. Retrieved from https://www.proquest.com/other-sources/couple-reflects-on-subway-adoption-miracle-more/docview/2537379547/se-2 Mercurio, P. (2013, Mar 03). Finding a son in the subway. New York Times (1923-) Retrieved from https://www.proquest.com/historical-newspapers/finding-son-subway/docview/1814889854/se-2 OUR SUBWAY BABY. (2020). Kirkus Reviews, Lxxxviii(13) Retrieved from https://www.proquest.com/trade-journals/our-subway-baby/docview/2417855005/se-2