User:Ali-AlhajiA7A/Snack/ChaserBerry Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Ali-AlhajiA7A
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ali-AlhajiA7A/Snack

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * The Lead is clear and easy to understand
 * The information provided within it is appropriate to the article

Content
Guiding questions:


 * The content is relevant to the article "snack"
 * The use of facts offers a lack of bias
 * All of the information that was added contributes to the article and gives good insight into the topic

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * There does not appear to be any clear biases
 * The information is suitably balanced
 * No topics seem to have more attention than the others
 * The contributions focus primarily on facts and do not make any attempts at persuasion

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * All sources appear to be trustworthy and relevant to the topic
 * There is no recognizable bias toward source selection
 * The citations all have working links
 * The "very common" serving of Hummus could use a citation if possible
 * The Hummus section in general could benefit from a few references where it is deemed necessary

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * The content is written in a very comprehensive and accessible way
 * The very last sentence has a grammatical error: "Hummus can be used as [a] condiment"
 * The content is properly broken up into two sections, one per topic (Lupinus and Hummus)
 * None of the content appears to be lengthy or otherwise ill-suited for the article

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * The content added has brought in the diverse outlook of snacks across the world
 * Everything that has been added is insightful
 * The main improvement that I can think of is to correct the grammar error
 * More citations could be used, too, if they are available