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Article evaluation
Article evaluating: Mobile phone use in schools

Everything seems good except the fact that the article didn't seem to be neutral. I felt like it was leaning towards the school administration side a bit more compared to the students side. The view points seem a bit under balanced, but there isn't too much of a variance. I checked a couple of sources and they seemed to be accurate so I believe that the info within the paragraph is proper. Not every single fact is referenced but a good amount of them are correct as they should be. The paragraph starts off in 2005 and then jumps to 2015. I think it would be better if we had more info as to what happened and what caused the 2005 ban of cellphones to be imposed in New York. In the Talk page, people are talking about how they could add more studies performed on the research. I like the fact that it shows the recent studies done within the past and current year(s). This way Wikipedia discusses this topic is a bit different because I was expecting the "students' side" to have more info on them instead of the "school boards' side" since there would be more students editing this page than school administrators.